My arts~

[George_Fluffington]

Okay, last one didn't show anything because they didn't meet file size, so I'll just use links.

New Pages Chapter 10 Cover:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/art/New-Pages-Chapter-10-cover-168797446?q=&qo=
Page 1:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2sllx4
Page 2:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2slm7i
Page 3:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2smft9
Page 4:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2sp0oc
Page 5:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2ts68r
Page 6:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2u8yxy
Page 7:
http://jiakko.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2uja8g

And of course, more to come. The chapter is supposed to be 20 pages, after all.
 

[BeniBooB]

what to say, hmmmmmm....
well the story line is no wehre near comprehendable yet, so far it seems like it has no point like gintama
(b happy im comparing this to gintama)

well u seem to capture the facial expressions well, that is ussually the most difficult thing of making a mango and the sotry line of course. but toad seems to lack personality. i also wana rape toad =_= ....

in all ur not a great mangaku yet but that shouldnt discourage u. it takes time

[George_Fluffington]

Thanks, glad for comment.
Chapter 10 may or may not be less confusing if I posted the previous nine chapters first. That's what I'm gonna be doing, but it'll take a while. Also, hey, Gintama, that's not bad of a comparison for now. I just hope to improve. The facial expressions can be pretty difficult, but I practice a lot, so hope to practice more. And poor Toad, always easily taken advantage of~

Anyways, that wasn't discouraging, I was actually hoping someone would give me their honest opinion as opposed the usual "That's good" "That's bad".